wp2 rubric



                                                 Did not meet Met  exceeded

Information for both articles is presented



Everything is cited that has to be cited



Able to understand what the research project will be on



Information for both articles is presented



Everything was neat and clear on slides



Elevator pitch....





An Elevator pitch is a succinct and persuasive sales pitch that makes the audience more interested  it sparks interest in what your trying to do or sell.
Clothing boutique
Strengths- she added life experiences to her speech, she knew what she wanted to say, she advertised her business/idea
Weaknesses-  stumbled on words a little,  looked at index cards a to often

The best “ Elevator Pitch” of the world?

Healthys elevator pitch


Strengths- Put a video in with it shows visualization, knew what they wanted to say, explained business well

Weaknesses- stumbled on words a little, unclear at some points

I like that Healthy's is more of a real life example with them asking for money to build their business. I liked how they added videos in to show visualization to grab interest in audience more. I don't really like the clothing one just because she didn't really have like an outgoing tone with it to try to persuade people to invest in her business. Also, the girl for the clothing place she kinda just talked about how her store will be for people that can't really afford clothes. 

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